Some people think that schools should select pupils according to their academic abilities, while others believe that it is better to have pupils with different abilities study together. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,
while
many people believe that
pupils
who have the same level of
knowledge
should be in the same
school
, others have
different
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of view that
pupils
who have different
abilities
should learn together. Today, we are going to discuss both opinions. On the one hand, it is believed that
pupils
should be selected by their academic
abilities
.
Firstly
, teachers can cover the
knowledge
for
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all
students
in the class. Because
students
have the same level of
knowledge
,
so
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they can understand the same thing.
For
instance
, all the
students
in the class can understand advanced theories in the subjects because they have the same strong base
knowledge
to support the idea.
Finally
, good
students
do not
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by bad
students
. If you are surrounded by bad people, you will become a bad person soon.
For
instance
,
a
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good
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can learn bad habits because they make
friend
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with bad
students
. But if all excellent
students
are
all
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in the
school
, they can be better and better.
On the other hand
, people think that
pupils
who
has
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different
abilities
should be in the same
school
.
Firstly
,
students
can learn from each
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. Each student has different
abilities
and
level
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of
knowledge
, so they can improve each other.
For
instance
, a student who is good at math can
taught
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others who are bad at it.
This
can make
pupils
strengthen their ability and gain
the
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knowledge
.
Finally
,
this
diversity can help
school
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interesting and fun. Because many
students
have their own
abilities
,
so
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the
school
can have a lot of activities for
students
.
For
instance
, a violin class can be held for
students
who are excellent at it or a football team can be established for the boys who have
physical
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abilites
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abilities
to join in.
This
can make the
school
much more fun and helpful for
students
. In conclusion, selecting
students
based on their academic
abilities
has
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some benefits. But it can not outweigh the idea that
pupil
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with different
abilities
learn together. Personally, I think that
students
can learn from each other's good
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, and make themselves better with the support
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surrounded
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friends.
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