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Some people believe that children who are brought up in families which don't have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up in wealthier families. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The economic disposition of some
children
 usually reflects how they deal with problems in
life
. Being in a poor family, their preparedness is better than those of richer families. I strongly agree with
this
 notion. I would argue that
children
 in a family without much money their attitude towards
life
 early mature compared to those
children
 in a wealthy family who have difficulties in facing
life
 obstacles. Nowadays , there are wealthy parents who do not want their
children
 to experience difficulty in their early
life
.
This
 leads to being comfortable with the resources that make things easy for them, that's why when
life
 throws hardship on them, they are the first incapable of finding a resolution. Cases of suicidal deaths,
for instance
, often adolescents have a higher register of deaths
according to
 the city mortality statistics.
Hence
, their level of maturity towards finding solutions is premature. Meanwhile, I would argue that that person who is brought up in a poorer family their maturity well develops, as they are the first to taste the bitterness of
life
 first-hand. Belonging to a family without money early develops their
life
 awareness and
thus
 prepares them for any difficulties that
life
 throws at them. Like the child of the farmer in our neighbouring city,it was news that he acquired a scholarship from one of the most prestigious universities in the USA and graduated with flying colours. It a noteworthy that he passed enormous struggles to the point of almost giving up before reaching success. In conclusion,
although
 I acknowledge the parent's actions towards providing comfort to their
children
, I strongly agree that
children
 who are not exposed to the reality of
life
 are less prepared to deal with it in the future like
children
 in poor families.
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