Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Personally, I see that there are negative effects that are based on showing crime scenes and harmful pictures on public television, but I disagree with the statement
this
Information would only end in disadvantages, and
therefore
, should not be published. On the one hand, fictional movies that contain an unrealistic storyline of crime and violence might have detrimental consequences. Most of these films are too exaggerated and impulsive
,
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and show too much violence that can lead to aggressive behaviour oneself.
For example
, the Marvel movie "Deadpool" shows a tremendous amount of violence happening way too easily, so children could pick up a faster use of that behaviour by watching these movies. Anyhow,
this
kind of film material has a minimal age and parents are responsible to explain their children in the media world.
On the other hand
, news and documentaries have to show the drawbacks of society and life that are happening outside. Topics like rape, murder, harming the environment, remaining
actions
against minorities, and others are not nice to see but needed to be seen. Already too many violent
actions
, for ,example rapes by special persons in public or
actions
against gay or trans people keep being untold. But cases,
such
as the murder of the trans person "Malte"
while
the
last
CSD in Mannheim took place, have to become public so individuals know what to be aware of and change in society. Concluding I think media should be a tool to offer us uncensored information so people get to know the truth, and can choose their
actions
based on that knowledge,
while
it is up to responsible parents to teach their children what is fictional and wrong and what is the bitter truth.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • apathetic
  • heightened sense
  • anxiety
  • restricting
  • panic
  • rumor spreading
  • censoring
  • infringe
  • freedom of the press
  • informed public
  • precautions
  • policies
  • balance
  • broadcasting
  • sensitive content
  • exposure level
  • educational content
  • constructive approach
  • societal issue
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