A freiend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. th your letter - explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday - describe some possible disadvantages - say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer

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Dear Elly How are you doing? I am very happy that you asked for my advice regarding the camping holiday. I definitely recommend you go on

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trip.I know you have been working hard for the past few months and I think

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trip would be a nice break ,

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you have been keeping telling me ,I need a break so I think

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is a good opportunity to be in nature. I remember the

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time I went to Bahar Mountain was

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of spring so it may be a little warmer as you want to go there in summer.

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,have an appropriate quantity of water for a day with you as you are at the top of the mountain and it is nowhere to be found.

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,I recommend you take all your necessary types of equipment

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as a good sleeping bag with you as the nights out there tend to be super cold. To be honest I would love to come with you but I am not sure if I can make it .I recently took a course in programming and the exam will be in the summer so I have to stay home and study. I hope you will enjoy

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holiday, and I am waiting for your feedback about

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adventure. best wishes, Sara

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

219 words

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