The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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These given maps illustrate the current industrial

area

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and the redevelopment plan in the town of Norbiton. As an

overall

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trend, more residential

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neighbourhoods

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with housing and other supporting facilities are about to build. As looking at the detailed information, Currently, there is a traffic circle and several factories in the

area

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that are to be removed in the redevelopment. It is noticeable that a road connecting a road of the southern

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and over the river is planned to be added with the housing complex right above the load which is currently farmland. In the East

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, there is about to build more supporting facilities

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as the playground, medical

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, and school

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of the street.

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, there are

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plans to construct houses and shops between a road

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newly added. It is

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noteworthy that, another roundabout is planned to be built below the

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area

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that is

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connected to between two roundabouts.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, that is".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

161 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The main aim of science should be to improve the people's lives . To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Do you think consumers should be responsible for their poor nutritional choices, or do food manufacturers need to be more honest about the potential dangers in eating certain foods which are high in salt, sugar and fat?