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The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.

The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
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The provided line graph illustrates the
number
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 of males and females reading
books
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 from the school library.
Overall
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, despite the
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 of girls reading
books
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 being greater in 2009, by the end of the given
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 the
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 of
boys
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 reached the peak point. The
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 of
boys
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 taking
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 from the school library in 2009 was about 25
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,
while
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 the
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 of girls in the same year was almost 50
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. In 2011 the
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 of
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 taken by males was almost the same as the
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 of
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 taken by females which equalled approximately 100 pieces of writing.
Although
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 the
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 of
books
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 taken by girls and
boys
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 in 2011 was exactly the same, right after that the
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 of
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 taken by
boys
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 rapidly increased to the
number
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 of 140
books
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.
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, in the same ,year the
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 of
books
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 taken by females steadily went down to 80
books
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books, boys with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 11 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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