The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
The provided line graph illustrates the
number
of males and females reading books
from the school library. Overall
, despite the number
of girls reading books
being greater in 2009, by the end of the given period
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,period
number
of boys
reached the peak point.
The number
of boys
taking books
from the school library in 2009 was about 25 books
, while
the number
of girls in the same year was almost 50 books
. In 2011 the number
of books
taken by males was almost the same as the number
of books
taken by females which equalled approximately 100 pieces of writing.
Although
the number
of books
taken by girls and boys
in 2011 was exactly the same, right after that the number
of books
taken by boys
rapidly increased to the number
of 140 books
. Moreover
, in the same ,year the number
of books
taken by females steadily went down to 80 books
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