The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.

The graph below shows the number of library books read by boys and girls at Starmouth School from 2006 to the present.
The provided line graph illustrates the
number
of males and females reading
books
from the school library.
Overall
, despite the
number
of girls reading
books
being greater in 2009, by the end of the given
period
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the
number
of
boys
reached the peak point. The
number
of
boys
taking
books
from the school library in 2009 was about 25
books
,
while
the
number
of girls in the same year was almost 50
books
. In 2011 the
number
of
books
taken by males was almost the same as the
number
of
books
taken by females which equalled approximately 100 pieces of writing.
Although
the
number
of
books
taken by girls and
boys
in 2011 was exactly the same, right after that the
number
of
books
taken by
boys
rapidly increased to the
number
of 140
books
.
Moreover
, in the same ,year the
number
of
books
taken by females steadily went down to 80
books
.
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