Your friend has written to you asking for your advice on his/her parents who will be visiting your area. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: Suggest the places they can visit Recommend a place where they can stay Offer to do something with them.

Dear Sam, How are you
buddy
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? I am so happy to hear that your mom and dad are going to be in my city next week. It is a nice and
quite
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quiet
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place, yet has so much do around. I can guide you on the best attractions around. Your parents can visit the Blue Mountain village
that
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has a lovely rural vibe, and
beautiful
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a beautiful
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view of the valley. They
also
offer
cable-car
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cable car
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rides across the mountains which is totally breathtaking. In fact, I have a friend who owns a lovely cabin there, where your folks can stay for a day or two. It has an amazing view of
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at night. I am sure they will love it. They can
also
visit the famous Niagra
falls
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which
is
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good for a
day-trip
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day trip
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. If they plan to visit
the
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Niagra on
the Saturday
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Saturday
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, I can join them for the boat ride. It would be so nice to meet them after all these years. Don't hesitate to ask if they need any help when they are around. Hoping to see everyone soon. Take care Apoorva
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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