The map below is of the town of canterbury. A new school (s) is planned for the area. the map shows two possible sites for the school. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the map depicts a projection of the
town
of Canterbury, and the distance from the Town
centre
into Stury and Chartham
, hence
, by adding Two sites for the school, furthermore
, the maps involve four places Countryside housing, Main roads, the Town
centre
and university.
overall
, as we see in the maps from the top of the view, housing is surrounded by the countryside, while
in the town
centre
, there is no traffic zone, in contrast
, in the town
centre
where the second school are planned for this
area, as I mentioned, people they live in Chartham
, is about 4,500 of population, also
the distance in the main roads is 7 KM from Chartham
S2, whereas
, the First School 1 will Build in a countryside, is a Bit close for housing,university, and Sturry, otherwise
, the population in Sturry is biggest than Chartham
, is 7000 of inhabitance, moreover
. the Main roads are the smallest in this
area and there are a lot of facilities.Submitted by creativedesign1a9 on
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