The map below is of the town of canterbury. A new school (s) is planned for the area. the map shows two possible sites for the school. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below is of the town of canterbury. A new school (s) is planned for the area. the map shows two possible sites for the school. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the map depicts a projection of the
town
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of Canterbury, and the distance from the
Town
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centre
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into Stury and
Chartham
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,
hence
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, by adding Two sites for the school,
furthermore
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, the maps involve four places Countryside housing, Main roads, the
Town
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centre
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and university.
overall
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, as we see in the maps from the top of the view, housing is surrounded by the countryside,
while
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in the
town
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centre
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, there is no traffic zone,
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, in the
town
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centre
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where the second school are planned for
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area, as I mentioned, people they live in
Chartham
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, is about 4,500 of population,
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the distance in the main roads is 7 KM from
Chartham
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S2,
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, the First School 1 will Build in a countryside, is a Bit close for housing,university, and Sturry,
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, the population in Sturry is biggest than
Chartham
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, is 7000 of inhabitance,
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. the Main roads are the smallest in
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area and there are a lot of facilities.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, centre, chartham with synonyms.
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