More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

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number of people
who
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want to settle down in big
cities
for improving their
life
,
however
,
city
life
is
quiet
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hard and has a lot of serious
problem
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. I believe that
the
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governments
would have solutions to improve
the
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life
in large metropolises. On one hand, as I see it when lots of people have lived in a
city
they can get stuck because of many vehicles, it
also
pollution of the air which affected their health. Citizens of
cities
have to pay for their living much higher than it is in a small town or village
such
as the cost of education,
treatmen
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treatment
,
accomudation
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accommodation
, transport and even food.
For example
, air pollution is at alarming levels
due to
emissions from transport,
factories
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and factories
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. It creates lung-related diseases and makes urban areas less suitable for children to grow up
.
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Moreover
, urban
life
is full of competition and it makes people’s lives depressing. Some people have to compete to get in a public car, wait a few hours in traffic jams and fight very hard to get a worthy job.
As a result
,
city
life
can be unhealthy and stressful. To overcome some of the major disadvantages of living in
cities
,
governments
should address these issues.
First,
they should control daily commodity prices and build higher buildings to cut rent.
Second,
governments
can enact laws banning vehicles in the
city
center
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and should introduce more public transportation with better facilities to reduce traffic congestion. A third option would be the film industry and employment in rural areas to reduce the pressure on big
cities
. In conclusion, the
governments
should take care
to
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people’
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living
standard
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standards
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and make sure the rural areas have
sufficient
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job
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jobs
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for the residents here.
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  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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