You are not happy with the course you are doing at college and would like to change to a different course. Write a letter to the college director requesting to change your course. You should include details about: what course are you doing now why you are not satisfied with that course what course you would like to change to.

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Dear Sir/Madam , I am Maria from the Fashion Technology batch starting in early 2023 . My enrolment number is 1100003614. I am writing

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letter in regards to requesting a change of my current course ,

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, the modules which are being taught are not as per my alley . After attending mentor sessions for 2 months have realised that

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course is particularly theory-based and not practical. Pursuing these subjects for 3 years will become a bit challenging for me since different students have ways of learning and personally for me practical works are better than theory,

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I would like to switch to another one something with more practical work .

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, have observed from some of my fellow hostel mates that Fashion Designing studies are more designed based and not just on paper,

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do contain some theory learnings as well .

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gives an opportunity to elaborate software like Photoshop and Coral Draw. Would like to request a switch from my current course to the new one I am more fond of . Thanking you for your support, looking forward to your positive response. Yours sincerely , Maria Martin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

195 words

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