The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

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gay
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stays debatable. It is thought that
this
type
of
marriage
has negative effects on the public,
however
, others consider that it is
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trend and the government should allow people to choose
this
trend. In the subsequent paragraphs,
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begin
with, there are several reasons why I argue the following point of view.
Firstly
, it affects
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the cultures negatively
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and reduces nations' traditions.
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culture,
this
type
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marriage
is
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and
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number of society will be against
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gay wedlock. Today,
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males are against and they could reduce these gays.
Secondly
, it will affect negatively in
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of the country. It means that people who are
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gender in the relationship, could not have a child. To illustrate, if they were both females, they would not have
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testosterone
which is crucially important to have a kid.
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to marry
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gendered partners.
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think that they are abnormal and adverse
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them
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, but,
according to
scientists men like other men for their body and beauty.
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, gendered
marriage
is well-known. Another factor which led to
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of
this
type
of wedlock is
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LGBTQ.
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, no one had
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in gendered partners before LGBTQ came to our country in 2018. After that, gays and transgenders started to talk about their rights and attract other crowds. In conclusion,
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that gay
marriage
is illegal. In my opinion,
this
type
of
marriage
is illegal and it has
negative
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a negative
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effect on society.
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