The issue of gay marriage remains controversial. Some people think that this trend has adverse effects on the society while others believe that it is seen as a natural trend and right for people to choose this type of marriage. Should gay marriage be legal?

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marriage

stays debatable. It is thought that

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type

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marriage

has negative effects on the public,

however

, others consider that it is

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trend and the government should allow people to choose

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trend. In the subsequent paragraphs,

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begin

with, there are several reasons why I argue the following point of view.

Firstly

, it affects

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the cultures negatively

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and reduces nations' traditions.

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culture,

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marriage

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number of society will be against

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gay wedlock. Today,

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males are against and they could reduce these gays.

Secondly

, it will affect negatively in

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of the country. It means that people who are

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gender in the relationship, could not have a child. To illustrate, if they were both females, they would not have

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testosterone

which is crucially important to have a kid.

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to marry

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gendered partners.

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think that they are abnormal and adverse

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, but,

according to

scientists men like other men for their body and beauty.

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is well-known. Another factor which led to

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of

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LGBTQ.

For instance

, no one had

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in gendered partners before LGBTQ came to our country in 2018. After that, gays and transgenders started to talk about their rights and attract other crowds. In conclusion,

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that gay

marriage

is illegal. In my opinion,

this

type

of

marriage

is illegal and it has

negative

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a negative

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effect on society.