Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and Entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that It is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Over the few decades,

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methods

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completely changed. These days, more and more parents gaining valuable information from Professional psychologists that point out babies had better be involved in

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substances so most people

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advice

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others believe that those infants become selfish in adulthood and face problems in

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society. On the one hand, the majority of Young couples comprehend that letting toddlers

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have

an options

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in their routines like clothing, nutrition and dolls;

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children

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to

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have

self_confident

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self-confident

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, statistics show that most successful executives in business are those

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who did these mentioned elements by themselves and

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style can enhance the ability

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responsibility.

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, not only does it make

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have duties but it

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open

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up doors to

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kid's

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talent quickly. A good example of

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would be a child who has a gift to become

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clothing designer as she combines outfits well and shows a sign of innate capacity.

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, many nations hold the view that providing Unlimited choiceness from childhood could

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youngesters

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youngsters

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even if they grow into adults because

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manner can be a portion of

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's Character. It means that freely raising

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never allow

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checked by procreators and

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rise to putting them in

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by doing

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recreational activities

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joy riding

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or

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addict

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to drugs.

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, these matures would be unsuccessful in the workplace.

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a nightmare for them as never respect others'

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on their own views and want each body to accept them. In conclusion,

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rearing up

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with many choices can have positives and negatives ; as I see It, both of these views explain acceptable possibilities but the

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factor is that kids should

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up in moderation system

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not letting them do whatever they want and not prohibit them from building their self_confidence.