Nowadays, it has become easier and more affordable for people to visit other countries. Is it a positive or negative development?

It cannot be denied that as international

travel

is becoming easier and more affordable, certain issues and

inconvenience

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have been brought to both

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travelers

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and locals.

As a result

, some impressionable people might form the bias that the

development

of international

travel

is more of a negative

development

.

Nevertheless

, as far as

culture

and globalization, international

economy

, and environmental protection are concerned,

such

a

development

is for sure a positive one. First and foremost, the increasing easiness and affordability of international

travel

promotes

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both the spread of domestic

culture

and learning of foreign

culture

, contributing to a deeper international mutual understanding.

Due to

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in ideology and

value

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, nations around the

world

usually hold

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opinions

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others, causing difficulties in personal, business, and political communication and cooperation. Easier international

travel

not only enables

travelers

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to show the

world

what their true life is

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but

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the

world

right in front of the

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.

Second,

the fact that easier international

travel

promotes the growth of

international

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economy

indicates that it is definitely a positive

development

. Take Thailand, a country that benefits greatly from tourism,

for example

. Thanks to the easiness of international

travel

in modern days, the reasonable cost of living, fantastic sightseeing spots, and charming

culture

in Thailand can be enjoyed by people around the

world

.

As a result

, about 25% of Thailand’s

economy

is closely associated with tourism, which has provided tons of jobs for locals. Had it not been for the easiness and affordability

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international

travel

, Thailand would not have been able to attract international

travels

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or create jobs for citizens. A voice arises that international

travel

could bring devastating effects

to

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the local environment

due to

pollution. Ironically, it is usually not the

travelers

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who bring damage but lack of funding or poor management. Particularly in developing regions, without the income from

travelers

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, the locals would have no choice but to exploit natural resources and damage the environment;

on the other hand

, effective tourism management can not only generate funding for

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environmental protection but keep the sightseeing spots from being affected.

Therefore

, in terms of

culture

and globalization, international

economy

, and environmental protection, I strongly hold the opinion that easier international

travel

is a positive

development