It cannot be denied that as international
travel
is becoming easier and more affordable, certain issues and
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have been brought to both
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and locals.
As a result
, some impressionable people might form the bias that the
development
of international
travel
is more of a negative
development
.
Nevertheless
, as far as
culture
and globalization, international
economy
, and environmental protection are concerned,
such
a
development
is for sure a positive one.
First and foremost, the increasing easiness and affordability of international
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both the spread of domestic
culture
and learning of foreign
culture
, contributing to a deeper international mutual understanding.
Due to
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in ideology and
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, nations around the
world
usually hold
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opinions
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others, causing difficulties in personal, business, and political communication and cooperation. Easier international
travel
not only enables
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to show the
world
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the
world
right in front of the
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.
Second,
the fact that easier international
travel
promotes the growth of
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economy
indicates that it is definitely a positive
development
. Take Thailand, a country that benefits greatly from tourism,
for example
. Thanks to the easiness of international
travel
in modern days, the reasonable cost of living, fantastic sightseeing spots, and charming
culture
in Thailand can be enjoyed by people around the
world
.
As a result
, about 25% of Thailand’s
economy
is closely associated with tourism, which has provided tons of jobs for locals. Had it not been for the easiness and affordability
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international
travel
, Thailand would not have been able to attract international
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or create jobs for citizens.
A voice arises that international
travel
could bring devastating effects
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the local environment
due to
pollution. Ironically, it is usually not the
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who bring damage but lack of funding or poor management. Particularly in developing regions, without the income from
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, the locals would have no choice but to exploit natural resources and damage the environment;
on the other hand
, effective tourism management can not only generate funding for
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environmental protection but keep the sightseeing spots from being affected.
Therefore
, in terms of
culture
and globalization, international
economy
, and environmental protection, I strongly hold the opinion that easier international
travel
is a positive
development