The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity
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The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of citizens of different youth groups varying from 18 to over 65 in Britain who donated funds to charity between 1990 to 2010
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, we can see that the middle youth group donated more money at the beginning than the elder groups,
whereas
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the adults were 3 times more generous at the start compared to the end.
According to
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the chart, the old age group of 26-35 presents 31% in 1990 after 20 years it changed to 24% dipping by 7% as opposed to the higher life group of 51-65 which was 35% in 1990 but it increased to 39% in 2010 and represented the highest figure on that year.
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36-50 was at the peak number in 1990 making it 42% and
then
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it fell marginally to 35% as it comes to the oldest category of people who are over 65 in 1990 the figure was 32% but during 2 decades it rose slightly to 35%.
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although
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adolescents between 18-25 years contributed 16% in 1990, it plunged to 7%
at the end
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of the period.
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