Some People claims that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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In the modern era, household waste is increasing day by day and nobody try to solve the issue.
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, the folk of the community believe that authority has more power to make recycling necessary by regulating strict rules and regulations for the community who throw debris and making sure that household wastes are recycled properly.
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, waste recycling is that common responsibility of society and the power should impose the 3R,S rule which stands for reduce, reuse and recycle. ,
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launch some educational advertisements and some general meetings to create awareness of some serious diseases which are caused by throwing
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trash.
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, it is a bitter truth of a society that people only follow rules because of punishments and taxes not for their health. for ,example in my ,city all the roads are full of trash and the crowd continue to throw garbage more and more one day will be there the state will take action and they have to pay a hefty amount of taxes for
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and people don't understand that it will cause several health issues like lung cancer, asthma . Plastic waste like water bottles, cold drink cans, and plastic wrappers can harm fresh water and marine water species. in ,
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conclusion I believe that ist completely necessary for an individual and for government to recycle litter and don't throw it on roads as it will save our environment from the most serious diseases and every specie will be protected from environmental hazards.
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