The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newpor

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newpor
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The following chart illustrates the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003 -2012.
Overall
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,it easily can be seen that the
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of burglaries experienced a significant drop,
while
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rates of car theft and robbery were changing differently.
Firstly
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,the
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of burglary occasions started at 3400,
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after one year it increased considerably,
however
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after reaching the peak of 3800 in 2004 the
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of burglary occasions started dropping consistently for over 4 years.
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this
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significant ,change it experienced an enlargement,which was stable in the future.
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car theft started at the point of two thousand and nine hundred and stayed the same for a few years. But
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there was a considerable decrease in the
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of 2000. After one year
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it followed a slight rise and it was fluctuating until it increased and stayed stable.
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, if we take a look at the
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of robberies which stayed at the point of 750 we can notice that it was unstable for a long period of time and became the same as it was at 2003
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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