Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Children tend to use mobile

phones

all day long in their free time. I believe it is because of technological change, and not only kids but

also

adults have

this

problem.

However

, a smartphone is one of the greatest inventions of the 21st century. Mobile

phones

are very useful and they can assist you sometimes. In the following paragraphs, I will elaborate on

this

topic, and discuss the pros and cons of it.

To begin

with, more and more businessmen are putting money into developing applications.

Thus

, we could have more fun by using our

phones

. Technologies are progressing, and

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plenty of things are connected to the Internet.

As a result

, basic electronic devices

such

as cell

phones

, computers, tablets, and so on are vital in our lives. People spend more and more time on them. We rely on them a lot because many things can be solved by using them.

For example

, we can buy stocks through our mobile

phones

instead

of going to a bank.

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of applications are useful, and you can download them from App Store or Google Play. Sometimes cell

phones

are indeed very helpful, but sometimes it is really harmful.

For instance

, if children use their

phones

as tools for learning stuff,

that is

good. But, if they play games

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, that might be bad for their lives. It depends on what you do on your phone. In a nutshell, nowadays, our relationship with smartphones is indivisible. You can buy tickets, surf the Internet, watch videos, and so forth on it. Smartphones are multi-functional, and they make our lives better. The most important thing is your intention. If you use it in the wrong ways, that will have consequences.