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The proccess deleanates how bricks are produced for the building industry.

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The
proccess
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process
deleanates
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delegates
how bricks are produced for the building industry.
Overall
, the whole operation consists of seven stages. It commences with digging the clay and finishes with delivering the excavation.
Initially
, the clay is
digged
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 by a tractor. Before sending the clay to a roller it is first sorted by the metal grid. Following that, it is sent to form shapes, they are either
cutting
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 by wire or
moulding
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moulded
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.
After
this
, shaped bricks
placed
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 into
drying
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 oven for 24-48 hours. Once the moulds are dried, they are put into
kiln
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the kiln
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 to
coolen
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cool
 the temperature for 48-72 hours. The kiln
firstly
 freezes
with
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moderate
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a moderate
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 level
200°C-900
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°C and
then
 with
high
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the high
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 incident (870°C-1300°C).
Finally
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 the ready bricks are packaged and delivered.
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