Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, people all over the world nearly

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possess a smartphone even some younger

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, who spend a lot of time on their devices. Each individual holds their own perspective of

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phenomenon, and I will present mine and explain it in succeeding paragraphs. First of all, it is true that a variety of digital products have emerged in our daily life and changed our living style to a large extent amidst the extremely fast development of technology and science.Owing to the unprecedented technological revolution, many new jobs have emerged and human society is operating faster, so the

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economic status of people has improved significantly.

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, parents can afford phones for both themselves and their

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, contemporary

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are increasingly obtaining

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at an early age, they are exposed to highly stimulating content,

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as video games or short videos.

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leads to less patience compared to previous generations, so they prioritize killing leisure or study time via watching highly stimulating

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rather than reading or playing with friends in reality. The progress of technology undoubtedly will bring about numerous innovations,

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, computers and

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etcetera. In my opinion, all products are effective

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the phone we used decides on the phone is positive or negative for humans. To exemplify,

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's unsupervised use of

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can lead to

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on their academic performance and social development, because young

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may lack sufficient self-regulation skills. But if parents offer correct guidance, it is definitely a good thing,

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as teaching offspring how to learn a foreign language assisted by the phone.

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in moderation and in the right way is a positive thing no matter for adults or

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