Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions?
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the same job applicants market as the young population. In my opinion, it often causes anxiety ad depression because of the fear to be outcompeted, and Change preposition
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companies
can solve this
issue by offering courses and trainings
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pieces of training
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employment to increase people’s value over time.
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negative feelings by reminding Correct article usage
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older people that they probably have not gained any marketable expertise. In a Change preposition
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such
dynamic life that we live though
today, many jobs are regularly vanishing because of Correct your spelling
through
appearance
of disruptive technologies. Skills that lead to Correct article usage
the appearance
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salaries today, can be completely outdated tomorrow. Add a hyphen
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Therefore
, it is not surprising to end up in a situation when
a person should start his or her career from a blank page. Correct word choice
where
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companies
should regularly offer trainings
and courses in different topics. Some lessons can be directed to improve Change the wording
training
pieces of training
competences
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it will be less likely that they will Add a comma
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For example
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non technical
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undestendable
.
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understandable
To conclude
, many people end up in
anxiety and depression because of the need to compete with younger people, and Change preposition
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companies
can solve that by providing more opportunities to grow competences
in different areas.Correct your spelling
competencies
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