The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the every year income of three bakeries in Calgary between 2000 and 2010. Units are measured in dollars. In general, what could
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stand out from the graph is that Amandine's bakery's earnings remained stable from 2000 to 2005 and experienced a sharp increase during the
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five years. Another interesting point is the amount of money that was earned by Mari Bakeshop decreased over the given period. Looking at the details, as regards Bolo Bakery, it can be clearly seen that its incomes experienced a significant rise, remained stable at 40.000$ over 3 years and reached a peak at approximately
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60.000$. If we look at Amandine's bakery, it remained constant during the first five years of the observed period and soared.
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, during the observed decade, it could be highlighted that Mari Bakeshop's earnings decreased twice, from 80000$ in 2000 to 40000 in 2010.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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