Nowadays more and more business meetings and business training are taking place online. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Recently nations all over the world experienced a vast pandemic which affected our lifestyle significantly .
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these days a great number of business appointments and business training are held online . I assume the benefits outraced the downsizes that occurred
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with , there are numerous benefits achieved
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of working online , for ,instance we can save a lot of time daily by not getting into the street and stuck in traffic . a survey has been done at oxford university revealed that 60 % of traffic comprises commuters who are going to work and coming back home from work .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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