Some students take a gap year after graduating high school to work and/or travel. Discus the advantages and disadvantages.

Students especially high school graduates prefer to take some time off after their

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to work or travel around.

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usually can be seen with the people who are willing to pay their own bills.

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is by far the better way to expose themselves to society.

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there are a few disadvantages to

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but still the vast advantages outweigh them.

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, on the positive ,side they are able to know the harsh reality and problems of earning

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the importance of standing by themselves in society. Young people mostly take a break from their

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in

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to earn more

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which helps in building a good career for themselves right from the early stages.

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phenomenon can usually be seen with students who travel across the country for their

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. Most Universities in the US charge huge fees for non-immigrants, so they don't have any other options, but to take the gap between their

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to pay the amount. On the other ,hand there are few individuals who plan on going on vacation in between their

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to escape from the hectic pressure they face and

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indulge the life.

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boosts their mental state and

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allows them to perform more accurately. A university in south China took the initiative that every student should take at least 6 months time-off for every 2 years and they have seen better results after that and now every university is planning to go on with

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model. In spite of the tremendous ,results there are a few drawbacks to

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. Some Teenagers who started making

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are accustomed to that and do not show interest in continuing their education. York University in Canada made a survey of students who dropped out from their classes and surprisingly they found that individuals like the way of life they are leading by earning

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and are happy with that and not willing to continue their remaining

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creates a huge impact not just for them but

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the country as they cannot produce more graduates.

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, taking time off from school is a very common sign among people nowadays as

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helps them to evolve and

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earn some

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to pay the bills and tuition fee by themselves. ,

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it creates a huge problem when they are habituated to making

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at the early stages of their career as it leads them to discontinue the rest of their education