1-Parents should take courses in parenting in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extent do you agree?
to keep them ready for parenthood
- to have
knowledge
To become
a good parent is quite challenging and taking care of Change the verb form
Becoming
youngs
is not an easy job. I would argue that having them Correct your spelling
young
on
class Change preposition
in
provide
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provides
knowledge
on how to raise children
not only that it prepared them for the hardship of parenthood. I strongly agree with this
notion as this
these measures is
essential in parenting.
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are
Parents
play a vital role in our childrens
lives, Change to a genitive case
children's
therefore
attending courses to improve their children
's lives keep
them ready for any future difficulty of raising them. Youngster as we know is hard to manage, understand, and Correct subject-verb agreement
keeps
demanding
that tend to test their patience to the limit. The Replace the word
demand
underpressure
and untrained mother will react with unwanted actions Replace the word
pressure
such
as yelling and shaming, sometimes leads
to beating as punishment for their Wrong verb form
leading
misdemeanor
.
If Change the spelling
misdemeanour
parents
are will
prepared, they can identify and able to Correct your spelling
well
handled
their Change the form of the verb
handle
children
's outburst
and tantrums Fix the agreement mistake
outbursts
that
allows them to handle Correct pronoun usage
which
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the situation
situation
smoothly. Having Fix the agreement mistake
situations
right
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the right
knowledge
hinders care providers in
giving emotional traumas to their young ones which can Change preposition
from
acquired
only by attending specialized Change the verb form
be acquired
acquire
class
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classes
,
like courses Remove the comma
apply
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that emphazise
emphazise
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emphasise
soley
on managing Correct your spelling
solely
child's
growth and development. Correct article usage
a child's
Hence
a child with a parent that openly support
, Change the verb form
supports
listen
, and in a harmonious family environment often Correct subject-verb agreement
listens
succeed
in their life and work endeavours.
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succeeds
However
, learning is not all happening inside the classroom, these can be achieved by seeing and listening to others in the community with children
, and most of the times
inside Fix the agreement mistake
time
in
our homes. Like mirroring the way our Change preposition
apply
parents
brought us into a well mannered
, responsible, and Add a hyphen
well-mannered
respectfull
person that Correct your spelling
respectful
this
connect
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connects
in
our childhood upbringing. Change preposition
to
Although
, this
is not applicable to all since not everyone have
the same experienced and home environment, making guided learning effective.
In Change the verb form
has
conlusion
, I strongly agree that it's a must for Correct your spelling
conclusion
parents
to take courses in parenting in order to alleviate the lives of their children
. Although
, I acknowledge the merit of the presonal
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personal
experienced
can be Replace the word
experience
source
of good parenting, albeit it is not as effective with the right Add an article
a source
the source
knowledge
that can be aquired
by professional guided learning.Correct your spelling
acquired
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