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The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph shows average carbon dioxide (co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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The line graph illustrates the average amount of
carbon
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dioxide
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 (CO2) discharged per
person
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 in the UK,
Sweden
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, Italy, and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 people in the UK and
Sweden
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 had a downtown
trend
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 in
carbon
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dioxide
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 (co2)
emissions
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 ,
while
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 the average
carbon
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dioxide
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 (co2)
emissions
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 in Italy and Portugal showed an upward
trend
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 over the past five decades. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that average
carbon
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dioxide
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 (co2)
emissions
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 in the UK remained almost constant during the first 10 years,representing nearly 11 metric
tons
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, and gradually dropped down to around 7 metric
tons
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 per
person
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 in the year 2007.In the meantime, the increasing
trend
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 in
carbon
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dioxide
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 (co2) discharged By people,showing the peak emission volume at over 10 metric
tons
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 per
person
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, stopped in 1977,
then
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 fell in the following years.
On the contrary
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,the upward
trend
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 in the average
carbon
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dioxide
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 (co2)
emissions
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 in Italy overtook the emission rate in
Sweden
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 after the year 1987.In 1997 ,it reached approximately 7.5 metric
tons
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 per
person
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 and remain the same afterwards.In Portugal,the average
carbon
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dioxide
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 co2
emissions
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 first started lower than 2 metric
tons
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 per
person
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,In 2017 ,it dramatically increased until hit the same amount of co2 discharge in
Sweden
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. .

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, co, person, sweden, trend, emissions, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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