Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some
people
hold a belief that accepting an unsatisfying situation
is the best choice for us. However
, others firmly believe that people
have to try and improve in such
bad situations. In my opinion, it is a controversial issue which deserves an in-depth discussion. Thus
, I will discuss both these points of view below.
To begin
with, the front and centre in its favour is
that Change the verb form
are
people
tend to accept a bad situation
, such
as the
job they do not like. Correct article usage
a
Nevertheless
, is it really a bad situation
? The answer might not.
In fact, Add a missing verb
be.
people
take a job that they do not like, which might offer a high salary. Although
they are dissatisfied the
job, the high Change preposition
with the
payment
can allow them to buy many things they want.Replace the word
pay
According to
a survey which
conducts on workers, the higher salary they get, the more unsatisfactory they state.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the contrary
, some people
claim that improving themselves is the priority choice for getting out of bad situations. The reason is that human
are unlimited. Fix the agreement mistake
humans
People
can try to improve themselves in order to prove their abilities. For instance
, a person who is not good at studying English at first. However
, after learning a
couple of years, the person can speak English fluently, so Change preposition
for a
that
the person might have an opportunity to study abroad or get a better occupation. Based on Correct word choice
apply
this
compelling reason, people
should not accept a bad situation
easily, they should try to improve their abilities to escape it.
In conclusion,despite
some Change preposition
apply
people
still suppose that there is a bad situation
that people
should accept. In contrast
, I strongly believe that people
have an unlimited ability
Fix the agreement mistake
abilities
,
because Remove the comma
apply
people
can improve themselves via learning. Thus
, we should try to make ourselves better in order to face bad situations.Submitted by miainspirit on
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