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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The two pictures of the plan illustrate the area of an
airport
 in comparison between the present and future in the coming year.
Overall
, it can be seen that over
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the
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time period the facilities for the
southwest
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airport
has
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dramatic changes by increasing
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at
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the expense of bag drop, ATM, sky train, and Car hire. Currently, the
airport
has
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 not many of infrastructure;
however
, in the next year, the most significant changes are the number of gates will be increased from 8 gates to 18 gates
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the walkway
in
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 the top of the
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 demolished and will be developed with a long Sky train. The shops will be constructed next to a security passport control.
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 the bottom of the
airport
, the Check-in point will be pulled down to the opposite side in an area of departure and replaced by a bag drop.
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, the café will be knocked down near departures. In part place of arrivals at present, there is nothing but in the next year, will be built a café, ATM, and car hire along the building.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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