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Many young people today leave their own countries to work abroad. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages on working abroad and give your own opinion.

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There is an
overall
 belief among people specifically youngsters regarding immigrating to other countries for the purpose of getting a job there .there are many cons and pros
consequently
 ,I assume it provides a huge benefit rather than downsizing. In the following ,paragraphs it will be discussed separately .
To begin
 with , when a child grows up , if there are some circumstances to make him live independently it will be considered a great opportunity to commence living in another place. since as long as a person is under parents' protection there is no chance to grow up and build an independent personality . The investigation which has done into
this
 matter revealed that immigrating in youth age can strengthen a child's personality significantly .
On the other hand
 , if everyone intends to go abroad to work and reside there ,after a
while
 some countries which are more affluent become more populated and there will be no chance for the rest to develop perfectly .
In addition
 , a person who immigrates and lives far from a family will always carry a feeling of loneliness. I personally confide the merits of immigrating outrace the demerits. I believe in spite of the hardship of living far from family and friends , it provides a great number of benefits in a way that feeling lonely can be ignored easily .
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