With an increasing population communicating via internet and text messaging, face to face communication will become the thing of the past. To what extent do you agree?
As the number of people using the internet and online communication continues to grow,
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statement and believe that the advancement in technology is never stopped people’s direct conversation.
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, interacting between individuals becomes much easier than in earlier days despite the distance, which benefits one’s personal and professional connection. Linking Words
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, the advancement in computers brings a new way of communicating.
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time, direct conversation plays a vital role in each of them because expressing and sharing their thoughts can happen physically, all sensitive information can be discussed in a private environment and critical issues can be handled more easily. Linking Words
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, meetings among friends and families are still happening.
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