Some people believe that people who read books can develop more imagination and language skills than those who prefer to watch Tv. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals argue that they prefer reading
books
than watch
TV
and they believe that reading
books
help them
enriches
Correct subject-verb agreement
enrich
show examples
their impressions. I completely agree with
this
opinion and will explain my reasoning in
this
essay below.
To begin
with in
this
day and age
TV
programs and technologies are much more developed and these assist
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
people
's daily life. Having said that some
people
like better reading
books
. They trust that
this
way
developes
Correct your spelling
develops
their mind.
For example
, if a person
want
Change the verb form
wants
show examples
to learn a new language teachers will suggest
to
Change preposition
apply
show examples
he
Correct pronoun usage
him
show examples
or
she
Correct pronoun usage
her
show examples
more reading in
this
language
books
and residents accept that
books
also
help to advance their creativity.
In addition
to that
books
also
educate
people
. Well-educated
people
differ from other
people
who do not read a
lot
. These
people
have
honor
Change the spelling
honour
show examples
in front of their
peer
Fix the agreement mistake
peers
show examples
. The scientific magazines show that
people
who watch a
lot
TV
Change preposition
of TV
show examples
raise the following position
than
Correct quantifier usage
more than
show examples
others who read a
lot
. Because
will
Correct your spelling
well
show examples
- informed
people
have
own
Correct pronoun usage
their own
show examples
opinion
Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
show examples
. Ignorant
people
have only
few
Change the article
a few
show examples
facts about something. In conclusion, I am of the opinion, reading
books
have a
lot
of positive effects than
watch
Wrong verb form
watching
show examples
TV
.
Submitted by chartakinnovation on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: