The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Given are two maps illustrating the changes in Norbiton industrial
area
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which will happen in the future.
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, the industrial
area
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is expected to be changed to a residential
area
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in the future, with the destruction of some specific facilities like housing and a school. Commencing with the
map
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now, in the centre of the whole
area
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are 8 factories scattered around the big circle, which is connected to the main road located in the southernmost
part
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of the
map
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and the easternmost factory. It is
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clear that on the eastern
part
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of the
map
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is located a town.
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, there is a long river that stretched from west to east and there exists farmland in the southern
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. Remarkable changes will happen in the future. The most noticeable one will be the 8 factories, which will have been replaced, by 6 housings scattered around the big circle.
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, shops and medical centres will be constructed in the southwestern and southeastern parts of the circle respectively. The road will remain stretching to the easternmost factory, which will be demolished to make way for a new school, with a playground located in its northwestern
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. The rest of the things in the first
map
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will be remained, with the exception of
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river, where there will be a bridge built to connect the southern and northern parts of the river.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area, map, part with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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