The bar chart below shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
expenditures
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expenditure
shares
for five different categories in USA
, Canada, Correct article usage
the USA
UK
and Japan in a time slot that is
2009.
Overall
, it is obviously presented that almost all nations had the most shares
for housing, while
the lowest shares
portions recorded for Health Care and Clothing in the given year.
In terms of food, Japan
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Japan's
expenditures
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expenditure
shares
were the
higher Correct article usage
apply
of
around 23% being higher than Change preposition
by
UK
’s shares
by approximately 3%. Canada and USA
had around 15% and 13% sharing percentages, respectively. Housing Spending Shares
hit the
peak in Correct article usage
a
USA
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the USA
of
just over 25%, Change preposition
at
while
UK
and Japan had
registered Unnecessary verb
apply
a share values
of about 24% and 22% to outrace Canada’s Share by around 3%.
As is seen, Transportation’s spending Correct the article-noun agreement
share values
a share value
shares
were 20% in Canada, and it accounted for 17% and 15% in UK
and USA
respectively. However
, Health care and clothing had the least shares
proportions of around 4% in UK
and 6% in Correct article usage
the UK
USA
.Correct article usage
the USA
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