The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The graph illustrates the country's
shops
which are
some
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closed and
are
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some
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opened from 2011 to 2018.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of open
shops
had increased and
then
gradually it dropped
at the end
of the period.
While
the number of shop
closure
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fluctuated, it
was
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increased
at
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the
last
year. There were an increase in the number of
shops
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openings to just over 6000 in 2011 and
it
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reached
at
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4000 in 2012 respectively.
On the other hand
, it reached a peak of 6000 in 2014. The figure for
shops
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openings was up to 4000 in 2018. The percentage of shop closures began at over 6000 in 2011. It reached
from
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6000 to 7000 in 2012 and 2013. In 2015, the proportion of shop openings decreased sharply to just under 1000 It rose to 5000 and remained unchanged between 2016 and 2018 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • peak
  • decline
  • surge
  • stabilize
  • correlation
  • economic conditions
  • consumer behavior
  • technological advancements
  • urban development
  • employment
  • retail sector
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