The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The graph illustrates the country's
shops
which are some
closed and Correct quantifier usage
apply
are
Unnecessary verb
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some
opened from 2011 to 2018.
Correct quantifier usage
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the proportion of open shops
had increased and then
gradually it dropped at the end
of the period. While
the number of shop closure
fluctuated, it Fix the agreement mistake
closures
was
increased Unnecessary verb
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at
the Change preposition
in
last
year.
There were an increase in the number of shops
openings to just over 6000 in 2011 and Change the noun form
shop
it
reached Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
4000 in 2012 respectively. Change preposition
apply
On the other hand
, it reached a peak of 6000 in 2014. The figure for shops
openings was up to 4000 in 2018.
The percentage of shop closures began at over 6000 in 2011. It reached Change the noun form
shop
from
6000 to 7000 in 2012 and 2013. In 2015, the proportion of shop openings decreased sharply to just under 1000
It rose to 5000 and remained unchanged between 2016 and 2018 respectively.Change preposition
apply
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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