You have just returned from a long holiday. While you were away, your friend looked after your house. Write a letter to you friend. In your letter - thank you friend for the things she/he did for you - offer to reimburse any money she/he spent on doing these things - arrange to meet your friend for a coffee late this week.

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Dear Sam, How are you? Thanks a million for taking care of my house and my pet

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I was away for a week. I really appreciate your help. It is only because you offered to help, I was able to plan

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trip with my family. As you know, my cat is high maintenance and she doesn't like to have strangers around;

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, leaving her with a pet sitter was not an option.

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, my plants would have died if they were left unattended for a week. I was wondering if you spent on any maintenance items for my house,

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as cat food, milk, or water. If you did, please let me know ASAP, and I'll pay it back. Let's catch up

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weekend at our old spot for coffee so I can thank you in person. I'll bring my cat along as she seems to be in awe of you. See you soon! Warm wishes, Akshita

Submitted by parasherakshita123 on Thu Jun 15 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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