Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that paying

taxes

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help

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toward building a nation.

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, some people believe that paying their

taxes

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only is not good enough and we have more duties to our

society

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. I agree with those who argue that we have more responsibilities as

citizens

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. On the one hand, in today’s contemporary

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society

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a big chunk of someone’s

earning

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goes toward

taxes

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, leaving them behind with a small amount of

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. Because of

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citizens

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often have to tighten their pockets and they are most of the time busy with the procurement of

day to day

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needs. Taking the former into account, it leaves the onus of building infrastructures,

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, and creating resources

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societies with the government as they are the ones, who receive

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a big amount of

money

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collected through

taxes

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.

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, I believe

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to paying

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, we have more duties as responsible

citizens

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. People should abide by laws and help those in need.

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, if no one is obeying the law, it will create havoc and disruption

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society

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and the government will need to spend more amount of

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on maintaining

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public order, spending

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.

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,

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the government makes programs for all members of a community, sometimes these welfare schemes are not able to reach less fortunate members of

society

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leaving them vulnerable. We can help

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members by being altruistic to our fellow countrymen. In conclusion,

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the

money

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contributed through

taxes

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is helpful for a country for a variety of reasons,

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apply

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I believe

citizens

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of any

society

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have more duties

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as abiding by the laws and

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those in need, making their nation a place full of felicity