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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #research
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There is a notable interest in familiarity with
origin
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the origin
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 of houses where
people
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 live in. From my perspective,
people
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 want to be aware of previous tenants in order to understand the
ambiance
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 of the walls.
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 with,
people
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 often have a curiosity about buildings, especially old ones. It is widely believed that houses in which someone prominent has lived are special places with a strong atmosphere.
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, some nations have profound beliefs about the magic effect that can houses make on tenants. The more powerful were
people
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 who lived in the building, the better and luckier will be new inhabitants. Potential customers of accommodation always like to inquire about everything that happened in the past
of
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building to be aware of probable problems or valuable items. Definitely, the best way to find out information about the history of the building is
old
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through old
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neighbors
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neighbours
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. They, as usual, were witnesses of crucial occasions and events in
building
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the building
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,
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 they can tell even very exceptional details about the house. Another remarkable approach
in
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to
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 revealing
a
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apply
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data about old and historical buildings is an archive.
People
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 can appeal to government agencies
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responsible
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 for their protection and they can approve
an
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access to documents that consist of appropriate information.
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, the history of buildings can be found on the internet,
in particular
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, if there were some crimes or bad accidents. In conclusion, nowadays the tendency to search for
building’s
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a building’s
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 background is becoming
more
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a more
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 popular
in
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view
of
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for
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the
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a
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 range of reasons, from curiosity to magic guesses.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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