You are going to visit the town where your friend went to university. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you will be visiting the town give details of where you will be staying ask your friend to recommend some evening entertainment.

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Dear John , Hope you are doing great ,

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, the weather condition might not be too good in Toronto City

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heavy snowfall . I am really excited to let you know that I am pursuing the Fashion Designing course from the same University you went to Alberta ,

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, as a standard operating procedure I have to visit the institute to complete

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admission processes next week .

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, have to look for an apartment where I could shift for the phase period of the examination .

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, I will be staying in the Hotel 'Hilton' next to the institution for 2 nights ,

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, was not very sure about how much time all the relevant paperwork will take . I remember very well you mentioned

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hotel with great service and reputation amongst most Canadians . The admission process will be done in a day hours and for the evening hours would like to take your advice, what will be the best place to visit wherein I can enjoy live music and delicious dinner ,

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, would really enjoy your company too . Please do let me know if you could take out some time and join me for an evening. Waiting to hear from you soon . Yours lovingly, Maria Martin

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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8 paragraphs

217 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

I am writing to inform you that
I am excited to announce that
I have decided to visit the town where you went to university because
I have always been curious about the town, and I thought it would be a great opportunity to explore it
I have booked a room at a hotel called
I will be staying in the town from
I am wondering if you could recommend any
fun activities
entertainment options
popular places to visit
restaurants
bars
clubs
concert venues
I am particularly interested in
local live music performances
cultural events
art galleries
theater shows
I would greatly appreciate your suggestions
Thank you in advance for your help
I am looking forward to hearing from you

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