The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The two maps illustrate how the
village
of Stokeford, situated on the east bank of the
River Stoke,
changed over an Remove the comma
apply
80 year
period from 1930 to 2010. There was considerable development of the settlement over these years and it was
gradually transformed from a small rural Add a hyphen
80-year
village
into a largely residential area. The most notable change is the presence of housing in 2010 on
the areas that were farmland back in 1930. New roads were constructed on Change preposition
in
this
land and many residential properties built
. In response to the considerable increase in population, the primary
Add a missing verb
were built
school
was extended to around double the size of the previous building. Whilst the post office remained as a Add an article
the school
village
amenity, the two shops that can be seen to the north-west of the school in 1930, no longer existed by 2010, having been replaced by houses. There also
used to be an extensive property standing in its own large gardens situated to the south-east
of the school. At some time between 1930 and 2010, Correct your spelling
southeast
this
was extended and converted into a retirement home. This
was another significant
transformation for the village
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