The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the expenditure of families for nine items in
one
nation every week from1968
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from 1968
to
2018. Change preposition
from
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the biggest one
is food and the lowest is fuel and power during 1998. However
, it is different in 2018 where the highest is leisure and the lowest is personal goods.
A closer look at the chart that in 1968 the majority of people spent their money on food which was just over a third and the highest one
during the time frame. Meanwhile, it was different in 2018 when leisure gained more than a fifth which was higher compared with all spending by time.
Moreover
, the fuel and power were below one
in ten which was lower than others in 1968. Similar to 1968, in 2018 not only fuel and power but also
personal goods obtained the last
position to allocate money and both of them were the same which were nearly 5 %.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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