The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart provides information about the expenditure of families for nine items in
one
nation every weekUse synonyms
from1968
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Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the biggest Linking Words
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is food and the lowest is fuel and power during 1998. Use synonyms
However
, it is different in 2018 where the highest is leisure and the lowest is personal goods.
A closer look at the chart that in 1968 the majority of people spent their money on food which was just over a third and the highest Linking Words
one
during the time frame. Meanwhile, it was different in 2018 when leisure gained more than a fifth which was higher compared with all spending by time.
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Moreover
, the fuel and power were below Linking Words
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in ten which was lower than others in 1968. Similar to 1968, in 2018 not only fuel and power but Use synonyms
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personal goods obtained the Linking Words
last
position to allocate money and both of them were the same which were nearly 5 %.Linking Words
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