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To succeed in a business, one needs to be good at maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#business #maths
Many
people
 believe that math skills are
a
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key important to
succeed
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 in a
business
.
While
 there might be some opposing arguments, I still agree with
this
 view because of more convincing reasons. On the one hand,
this
 opinion seems unreasonable simply because many billion
people
 would manage businesses successfully without math skills.
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 Jack Ma, who is a billionaire in China, as an example,
although
 he is not good at maths, he became one of the most electronic
commerce’s
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commerce
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 empires: Alibaba. In spite of the argument above, I highly support
this
 view for the following reasons. The first argument is that having mathematical skills brings some benefits to our
business
. A typical reason is that
almost
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most
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people
 who are good at maths have logical thinking.
As a result
, these
people
 would make an accurate decision without emotion, and
this
,
reduce
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 the failure rate in the
business
 management process. Another reason is that there are mathematical programs that predict
business’s
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 development in the future.
That is
 a reason why leaders have to follow financial reports which help them know more
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business’s
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 data.
This
 would help company leaders promptly come up with the most optimal methods, and
therefore
 push the company to new levels. In conclusion,
although
 I recognize possible arguments to reject the discussed view, there are more convincing reasons to believe that maths is a necessary tool to succeed in a
business
.
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