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You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend for the recipe invite your friend to the party

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Dear Rohan, When we were roommates in our college, we used to organize cleaning & cooking tasks very well as you used to take care of preparing dishes & I focussed on cleaning.
Also
, I haven't celebrated my birthday party since our graduation & planning to have
this
 on 19th
september
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. I would highly appreciate
if
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it if
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 you can help me with
couple
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 of
recipies
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recipes
 to cook. I have already completed
celebration
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the celebration
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 checklist
like
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for
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interior
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the interior
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 & exterior decoration of my place & left with finalising dishes to prepare. I have watched
couple
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 of videos
in
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 youtube for unique
indian
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 dishes but couldn't find them interesting & need your support here to help me with
recipies
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recipes
 of
of
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foods.
Likewise
, I remember that you were an expert at cooking paneer & mushroom
dish
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dishes
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 which had a
mouth watering
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mouth-watering
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 taste. If you can share these two
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recipes
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recipes
recipies
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recipes
,
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I
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i
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 am sure my guests will be delighted to have those
in
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 dinner. Please consider
this
 letter as
invitation
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an invitation
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 to my birthday bash. I can assure you
this
 celebration will your make
you
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your
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 day with
fun filled
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fun-filled
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 memories. Hope to see you soon. Yours Lovingly, Ashutosh.
Submitted by ashutosh on

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