The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The first figure illustrates the way power is consumed in an ordinary Australian family
while
the second pie demonstrates the consequences of that consumption which is greenhouse gas emissions.
Overall
, heating and water heating account for the most proportion of used energy in all categories. Besides
that refrigeration, other appliances, and lighting discharge a considerably high amount of exhaust gas compared to the used energy.
According to
the first chart, heating is the highest usage with 40%, followed by water heating with 32%, just less than 12%. The consumption rate of refrigeration, lighting, and cooling is decreasing from 7% to 4% and 2%. In addition
, the other appliances witness the use of 15%.
The second chart showed that 32% of water heating was the highest while
the smallest was cooling with 3%. Lighting, other appliances, and refrigeration doubled the used rate with 8%, 28%, and 14%. Finally
, the heating holds 15%, which was reverse triple the energy used.Submitted by cathyngo1512 on
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