You had volunteered to manage the safety at your housing estate after a few unwanted incidents. Write about one incident that happened while you were on duty.

My forehead was drenched with sweat. With each passing moment, that feeling of impatience arose. Where was Ahmad? He promised to meet me. I looked at my watch. It's quarter past twelve in the

nafternoon

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afternoon

. He was already fifteen minutes The coffee

shop

we had promised to meet was bursting at the seams and there were no air-conditioners to provide relief from the heat.

While

reading the latest news, I came across an article that piqued my interest. A group of burglars were caught trying to break into a house by volunteers from the Community Watch Scheme organized by the National Crime Prevention Council (NCPC). Suddenly, an incident that

occured

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occurred

in the past flashed before my eyes as though it was really happening before me *** “Irfan, do you want to volunteer for the community watch scheme?" asked my

neighbor

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and close friend, Afiq. I looked at the brochure he gave me. There was a very high number of break-ins to stores and houses in my housing estate. I felt worried. I decided to volunteer. Weeks passed. I did my patrols

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during

the daytime, so I didn’t find anything. I thought that there was no more criminal activity happening in the area of my housing estate.

However

, I was wrong. I didn't anticipate it. That day, I was assigned to patrol at night. The surroundings were pitch black. The atmosphere was quiet except for the people at the neighbouring coffee

shop

who were enjoying their meals. Suddenly, I was startled when I heard a sound that shattered the stillness of the night. I turned around. It's not from the direction of the coffee

shop

. My heart raced. I took a thousand steps towards the sound. Not long after, I located the source of the sound. A group of teenagers were trying to break into a

shop

. I panicked. After calling the police, I was at a loss

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what to do

next,

but I had no time to waste. I had to stop them. “Hey, you! Stop!” I screamed. When they turned around, my face went completely white. My chest felt tight and my heart raced.

In addition

to having an intimidating appearance, they were armed with crowbars. A cynical smile spread across their faces. Suddenly, a teenager threw his crowbar at me. “Ouch!” I shouted. I fell to the ground. My world went black. When I came to, I was confused. I found myself in a room

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was unfamiliar to me.

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were painted bright white and I was lying on a white bed. I saw my parents whispering something to the doctor. "Mother... father... where am I?" I asked. My parents turned around. A look of relief appeared on their faces. They took a deep breath. "You are in the hospital, Irfan. Your injury from the crowbar is huge. The teenagers have

also

been arrested by the police," answered my mother. I heaved a sigh of relief.

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I had done something to stop them. *** "Hey Irfan! Sorry I'm late," said someone behind me. I was hauled out of my reverie. I turned to face Ahmad. I smiled. Of

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that event will not stop me from doing what is right.