Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

People have been noticing that artificial
intelligence
robots
will probably be able to take over human’s
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in different
jobs
.
This
event is most likely to happen with
jobs
that don´t require complex solutions,
while
humans
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force will still be needed for some
intellectual
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focused activities.
This
essay will discuss why most
jobs
will be carried out by
machines
, but some of them will keep relying on
humans
. In the future, most menial
jobs
will eventually be done by
robots
because human
skills
are easily replaced by artificial
intelligence
in certain basic activities. The development of modernized software will help
machines
learn different types of human tasks, and
companies
will prefer to use these
machines
instead
of
humans
, because it will probably be cheaper and faster, increasing their production and profitability.
For instance
, many
companies
worldwide have already been using artificial
intelligence
for customer service, solving their client’s problems through
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chat
bot
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.
This
is less
expansive
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for
companies
,
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since
the
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artificial
intelligence
can work unstoppable, and the
machines
will
also
treat all the related complaints in the same way, which may increase solution rates and
client’s
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satisfaction. For these reasons, basic
jobs
that can be automatized will most likely be replaced by
machine
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and artificial
intelligence
.
On the other hand
, there are many
jobs
that require very complex and specialized
skills
, which can only be acquired with years of study and practice. In my opinion, it does not matter how far
humans
will be able to get with
technology
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improvements, some specific
skills
will never be replaced by software and
machines
. A range of traditional professions
are
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good
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example
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of
jobs
that will not be replaced by artificial
intelligence
,
such
as lawyers, psychologists, and doctors. Even though
machines
can learn specific
skills
related to
such
areas, the automatic way they operate will never be able to reach the individual issues or cover all levels of details that a complex problem would require. Imagine that a new disease has been discovered, if doctors did not exist, treatment for
this
new disease wouldn´t be possible until a new machine learn how to treat them
,
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since it takes time to develop a new artificial
intelligence
.
In other words
,
humans
should not be replaced in sophisticated
jobs
.
The society
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cannot disregard that
machines
and artificial
intelligence
are very useful for a variety range of purposes, including
jobs
. As explained above, in the future
humans
will be replaced by
robots
in many basic
jobs
, and some
companies
have already been relying on them lately. Even though the introduction of artificial
intelligence
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environment is a trend worldwide,
robots
will not be able to replace
humans
in sophisticated activities that
requires
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intellectual thinking and complex solutions.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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