Some people say that a person’s success is as a direct result of the way they were brought up by their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
IN TODAY'S COMPLEX WORLD WE ARE DEALING WITH VARIOUS TYPES OF PEOPLE. IN REALITY, THE FAMILY'S METHODS OF RAISING THEIR
CHILDREN
HAVE AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN THEIR LIFE. I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH THE STATEMENT AS CHILDREN
ARE ALWAYS INSPIRED BY THEIR PARENTS
AND KEEP ON WITH THEIR AIM. IN THE ESSAY, I WILL SUPPORT MY VIEW WITH EXAMPLES OF THE FORMER ARGUMENT.
FIRSTLY
, PARENTS
ARE RESPONSIBLE TO GROW CONFIDENCE IN THEIR KIDS IN DIFFERENT WAYS. MORALE IS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT THING YOUNG PEOPLE NEED; IT IS THE QUALITY THAT THEY NEED TO FACE THE MOST CHALLENGING SITUATIONS IN LIFE. MOREOVER
, CHILDREN
WHO ACQUIRE CONFIDENCE SINCE CHILDHOODTHEY TEND TO BE MORE INDEPENDENT AND DECISION-MAKERS. FOR EXAMPLE
, ENCOURAGING THEM TO PLAY SPORTS, IS ANOTHER OTHER WAY
TO SCOLD THEM FOR THEIR MISTAKES AND CORRECT THEM WITH A WAY
TO DESCRIBE WHAT'S RIGHT AND WRONG FOR THEM. THEREFORE
, FAMILY HAVE AN IMPORTANT ROLE IN RAISING CONFIDENCE IN GENERATIONS.
FURTHERMORE
, EXAMPLES ARE THE CORRECT WAY
TO TEACH THEM. THE YOUNGER GENERATION ALWAYS FOLLOWS THEIR ROLE MODELS, EITHER IT IS GOOD OR BAD. SO, IT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO BE A GOOD GUIDE FOR YOUR CHILD. FOR INSTANCE
, IF THEY SAW YOU HELPING OLD PEOPLE, THEN
THEY WILL DO THE SAME AND IF THEY REALISE YOU ARE PROFESSIONAL IN YOUR WORK SIMILARLYTHEY WILL PURSUE THE BEST IN THEIR CAREER. PARENTS
SHOULD BE A GOOD EXAMPLE AND TRY TO INFLUENCE THEIR CHILDREN
WITH ACTIONS MORE THAN WORDS.
TO SUM UP
, PARENTS
’ ACTIONS AND WAY
OF RAISING DIRECTLY AFFECT THE FUTURE AND CAREER OF THEIR CHILD. I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT PARENTS
ARE THE CREATOR OF KIDS' FUTURES. I RECOMMEND PARENTS
TO BE GOOD TEACHERS SO THEIR CHILDREN
BECOME GOOD MENTORS AS WELL.Submitted by nsaini2911 on
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