These days students prefer to live on campus while studying at college or university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays students would like to stay on
campus
during their academics at university.
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essay will discuss the both pros and cons of
this
phenomenon and conclude
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opinion
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To begin
with, scions have decided to spend their student life
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studying
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college
campus
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due to
many advantages.
Firstly
, students can reduce travel time
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between
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and their rooms, which will be away from the
campus
indeed, and utilize ample amount of time on their courses.
Secondly
, enlists can enjoy their leisure time in many activities, which are not possible off-
campus
.
For instance
, The NewYork Times conducted a survey on
campus
life across the globe, is unveils that the people who
resides
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in
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campus
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while
studying at college, are getting good results in not only their academics but
also
communicating
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linguistics than others, who are staying outside of the university premise.
On the other hand
,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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