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Although more and more people read newspapers on the internet, newspapers will remain as the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Nowadays, many people view and read
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 on the
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. Newspapers are
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 the main source of
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. In today’s
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 technology era, virtual
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 is
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 widespread. The first reason why I agree
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international
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 are quickly and easily accessible to people. Because the
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 is faster than mail. Waiting for the newspapers to arrive takes time and space. If a person needs a newspaper, he should go to the post office to buy a newspaper. Newspapers
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 many distractions. The
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 is convenient as it provides comprehensive
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. The second reason why I disagree the
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 is a distraction.
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, many distracting ads and games appear
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 reading
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. It divides attention during the
read
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.
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, If you go to the
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, you will first come across various advertisements. These will definitely spoil the quality of
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. It
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 has many harmful effects on human health, especially
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 causes slow vision and pain in eye function. My opinion is that the
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 is a necessary source of
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 and can meet current requirements.
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, any
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 can be
obgained
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obtained
 from the
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