Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, information technology gives opportunities to relocate
office
workplace wherever you want ( Correct article usage
the office
for instance
at home
, when travelling, etc.). It has some advantages as well as
disadvantages. In this
essay
I will Add a comma
,essay
further
examine this
thought-provoking issue.
On the one hand, information technology makes our life easier and alleviate
different , separate aspects of our lifestyle. Correct subject-verb agreement
alleviates
To begin
with, you are not dependent on your work place
. You can work everywhere and wherever you want. Correct your spelling
workplace
Furthermore
, you can spent
more Change the verb form
spend
time
with your family, Correct word choice
and bring
bring
up your children. Wrong verb form
bringing
In addition
, you will spend less money. In other
words
you do not need to pay for commute. Add a comma
,words
Also
, do not need
spend a lot on food somewhere in Add the particle
toneed
restaurant
or fast food restaurant. Correct article usage
a restaurant
Moreover
, you can just save time
and have time
on your hands. I mean that getting to jobe
is huge Correct your spelling
job
wasting
of Replace the word
waste
time
. However
, when you at
Add a missing verb
are at
home
you do not need to care about it.
On the other hand
, there are some drawbacks too. Firstly
, you can face the problem of lack
of communication. Correct article usage
a lack
Secondly
, sedentary
lifestyle can be harmful to your health. Add an article
a sedentary
Consequently
, in the future
you will have enormous problems with your health. Add a comma
,future
Likewise
, you may become less motivated. Another way to say it , when
you need to go to Add a missing verb
is when
the
job you should look good. Correct article usage
a
However
, after staying always at home
you do not think how
you look at all. Change preposition
about how
Lastly
, working at home
not
so easy. Add a missing verb
is not
For example
if you a
parent it will be Add a missing verb
are a
complicated
Add an article
a complicated
the complicated
focus
on work. Fix the infinitive
to focus
Besides
, working
place may not be suitable for the job.
In conclusion, opportunities which are provided by information technology not always can be useful and appropriate. Add an article
the working
a working
In contrast
, if rich the compromise and
outweighs all disadvantages that will be Correct word choice
apply
only
benefits that remain.Correct article usage
the only
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