In some countries owing a Home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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a

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property is being attracted

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all the time. In

this

century, most nations are

truggled

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struggled

to Buy a house

instead

of hiring.

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is because

,

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having a residence makes inhabitants

to

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feel Secure and I strongly believe

this

is a perfect development. In

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essay, I will expand my views and draw some

conclusion

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.

To begin

with, from primitive man,

shelter

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has been imperative to

surviver

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survive

survival

.

This

view is not changed as time goes by;

initially

, one reason behind

this

enthusiasm is that moving from one place to another is challenging for many because it undoubtedly alleviates the convenience of being stable

as well as

increases mental engagement

as a result

of finding suitable

domicide

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domicile

homicide

. A good example of

this

would be senile

people

.

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aged

unwillingless

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unwillingness

group are on the top of the list proven by statistics. There is no doubt that in powerful countries like America, Sweden and Canada and other developed provincial where the standard of

life

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is high so the interest

of

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owing

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owning

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a home is soared among

people

because the government support folks

through

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preparing them

mortgage

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with a small amount of instalment. It means that

,

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the majority of

people

are purchasing their own habitation where each

individuals

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could certainly secure the future, pointedly, not only do

wealty

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wealthy

city dwellers can have their own houses but it

also

make

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even poor society to possess a valuable property which they can sell it and invest the big money as stocks in government organizations. All things considered,

finally

, it is accepted that the desire

of

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owing

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owning

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a property is

occuring

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occurring

innately so

people

prefer having it rather than

rent

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it

along with

its positives like security and

also

financial benefits.