The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
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tourists
who travelled abroad between 1985 and 1995, Use synonyms
while
the accompanying graph shows the proportion of Linking Words
Japanese
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tourists
visiting Use synonyms
Australia
during the same period. Use synonyms
Overall
, both figures demonstrate a clear upward trend.
Regarding the first graph, it is evident that the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
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tourists
travelling overseas grew significantly during the period given. Specifically, the figure started at around 5 million in 1985, and within five Use synonyms
years
, it soared to approximately 11 million. The Use synonyms
number
remained relatively stable for a couple of Use synonyms
years
before experiencing another noticeable increase, peaking at around 15 million in 1995.
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Likewise
, the second graph illustrates an increasing trend in the proportion of Linking Words
Japanese
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tourists
visiting Use synonyms
Australia
. Prior to 1985, the percentage of Use synonyms
Japanese
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tourists
travelling to Use synonyms
Australia
was negligible. Use synonyms
However
, over the following Linking Words
years
, the figure grew rapidly. Use synonyms
For instance
, it accounted for approximately 5% in 1985, doubled in three Linking Words
years
, dropped to around 4% in 1989, and Use synonyms
then
climbed again to reach its highest point in 1993, with over 6%.
In conclusion, both figures demonstrate a clear upward trend in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
Japanese
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tourists
travelling abroad and the proportion of those visiting Use synonyms
Australia
between 1985 and 1995Use synonyms
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